Revise my essay

Please help me revise a little bit fo fulfill the following questions

1.    Is this a crisis?  Please list the Five Crisis Stages with specific examples and evidence for each stage.

2.    What is the major issue the research is attempting to address?

3.    Does your paper propose a solution or merely define the problem?

4.    How should the global community respond to this phenomenon?  How should your home country respond?

5.    Please cite any reference to course material and other references.